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| + | The section called "HISTORY OF MANKIND "needs corrections and/or clarifications . The statement " About 50,000 years ago , the Pleja System finally found peace and libert.But shortly before this time ..." is incorrect if the corrected date for the arrival of Pelegon was 190 ,000 BC. It was a long time before . The rest of the narrative does not follow either as it seems that only s short time elapsed from the arrival of Pelegon to the arrival of Arus . Vey confusing? | ||
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| + | --[[User:ITABASHI|ITABASHI]] ([[User talk:ITABASHI|talk]]), 14:22, 30 October 2012 (GMT) | ||
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Latest revision as of 14:22, 30 October 2012
Comments on Chapter 8 - HUMANITY
ITABASHI said ...
ITABASHI said ...
The section called "HISTORY OF MANKIND "needs corrections and/or clarifications . The statement " About 50,000 years ago , the Pleja System finally found peace and libert.But shortly before this time ..." is incorrect if the corrected date for the arrival of Pelegon was 190 ,000 BC. It was a long time before . The rest of the narrative does not follow either as it seems that only s short time elapsed from the arrival of Pelegon to the arrival of Arus . Vey confusing?
The section called "HISTORY OF MANKIND "needs corrections and/or clarifications . The statement " About 50,000 years ago , the Pleja System finally found peace and libert.But shortly before this time ..." is incorrect if the corrected date for the arrival of Pelegon was 190 ,000 BC. It was a long time before . The rest of the narrative does not follow either as it seems that only s short time elapsed from the arrival of Pelegon to the arrival of Arus . Vey confusing?
--ITABASHI (talk), 14:22, 30 October 2012 (GMT)